Tell a story in your press release lead

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Anecdotes are easier to believe, understand and remember

One way to pitch a story that reporters want to catch: Start with an anecdotal lead.

Anecdotes make your PR pieces easier to believe, understand and remember. So use an anecdotal lead whenever possible to illustrate your key idea.

As they rounded a bend on the country road …

Take a tip from this Department 56 Silver Anvil Award-winning release lead, and tap the power of storytelling:

Twenty-five years ago, on a holiday outing, a group of friends set off for dinner at a small country inn nestled in a quiet river town. As they rounded a bend in the road, they saw a small, quaint village, decorated for the holidays with lights that glowed on the fresh-fallen snow. This was the original inspiration for The Original Snow Village Collection — a nostalgic collection of lighted ceramic buildings that evoked memories of yesteryear.

Buddy was hit by a car …

And this Deramaxx Silver Anvil Award-winning release lead is one of my favorites. Note the story in the quote:

Even as the 200-foot giant mural was erected, Dallas resident Niki Eichman worried she might not be able to find her dog among the thousands of photographs.

“Buddy was hit by a car when he was very young,” Eichman says of the 4-year-old Lab mix that shattered his pelvis and dislocated his elbow in the accident. “To this day, the only reason we can wrestle and play is because his veterinarian recognized his resulting arthritis and did something about it.”

Tell me a story.

Want to stand out from the crowd of “today announced” and fact pack PR leads? Try storytelling instead

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